Author: Annastaysia Savage
Genre: children/young adult, fantasy
Published: 2011
Personal rating: 2.5/5
Yearly count: 16
Enduring the teasing and ridicule of her school mates, Sadie struggles through life as a pre-teen on the eve of her 13th birthday. Three years ago, a car crash took her mother, but Sadie never saw her body. She refuses to believe her mother is really gone. Holding fast to that feeling earns her the nickname "Crazy Sadie."
But when she turns 13, everything in her life changes. Faced with fantastical encounters, unexplainable transformations, and startling fears, Sadie struggles against an unknown evil – all while searching for her real identity.This book, focusing on children ages 10 and up, works on the same premises as So You Want To Be A Wizard by Diane Duane, Percy Jackson/Kane Chronicles by Rick Riordan, and Harry Potter by J.K. Rowling. A teen is thrust into a magical world and has to survive. Unfortunately, in comparison Any Witch Way fell a little flat.
The storyline was promising, but the execution left a lot to be desired. It started with the fact that magic was spelled with a ‘k’ in this book, which I personally found annoying. It always makes me think that the author is trying too hard to make the story different.
The story took a while to really ‘get started’ and when it did, it all felt a bit contrived, sometimes even repetitive. Every time Sadie was about to get some explanation (and with her the reader), something came up. . It got really old really fast . Instead of giving her at least a little information on each of those occasions, Sadie gets none of her questions answered until about half-way through the book, where there’s a huge information dump.
This was not the only time an information dump was used. Instead of spreading the new information and characters out, there were two or three moments in the book where a lot of information was told to the reader, mostly through a monologue by a character. This was a shame, because I could see so many moments where a little information could have been given to Sadie and the reader, so it would have been spread out a bit more.
Another point I am concerned about is the fact that while it is marketed as for ages 10 and up, there were some words I doubt 10-12 year olds would know the meaning of. How many 10-12 year olds know the meaning of the word widdershins, for instance? But, I will readily admit to not being qualified to judge this.
All of this, though, doesn’t mean this book has no good points. The storyline was promising and original enough that the information dumps could be forgiven. The different magical creatures Sadie meets are funny, clever, or scary, and never quite how you expect them. I really liked that. The plot had the right amount of excitement in it once it got going, keeping things interesting. And there was a very nice twist at the ending, totally unexpected. I was banking on something quite different. But I like the author’s ending better than the one I was expecting.
But even though the book did have its good points, I did not like it. The main reason for that was that I couldn’t connect with Sadie. I didn’t always find her believable, but perhaps that’s because I’m older than the target group. For three years she doesn’t believe her mother is dead, then when she comes face to face with her ‘mother’, she very quickly figures out it’s not her mother because her mother is dead… That was not the only time Sadie felt contradictory. The lack of consistency in her reactions to situations made me unable to believe in her.
That being said, Sadie’s annoyance at having her birthday on Halloween was very familiar to me and also very understandable. I think Sadie’s loneliness in school because she’s different is very recognizable for the target group. Perhaps they can connect with Sadie, where I could not.
All in all, I think this book is a promising debut, but Annastaysia Savage’s writing needs a lot of polishing before I can honestly say I’d recommend it. Consistency, which is lacking both in characterization as in the distribution of both information and moments of tension, is my main issue with the book. But I would definitely encourage the author to keep writing, because she certainly shows promise.
*This book was a free early review copy. This fact did not influence my review in any way.*